Dear Tama,Good work on this I like that you played on a phone and you watched a movie i wish i was here for the last week of school to do this.next time you could actually smile in your picture instead of frowning☺
Kia ora. My name is Ngakau and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.I liked how you play on your phone and watched movies.but I think you should write more.
Dear Tama.This is really awesome but I have question what movie were you watching? Well anyways I think this is cool but next time I think you should write more ok bye.
Kia ora. My name is Otukolo and I attend Te hapara School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.I really liked that you wrote about the holidays. This reminds me of what I did during the holidays. Next time you could add some more stories. ka Rawe Otukolo
kia ora. My name is Aromahana and I attend Te hapara School in Gisborne, i really liked When You added the background .This reminds me of when i make a google slide with herman.Next time you could put more detail into the background.
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Dear Tama,Good work on this I like that you played on a phone and you watched a movie i wish i was here for the last week of school to do this.next time you could actually smile in your picture instead of frowning☺
ReplyDeleteKia ora. My name is Ngakau and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.I liked how you play on your phone and watched movies.but I think you should write more.
ReplyDeleteDear Tama.This is really awesome but I have question what movie were you watching? Well anyways I think this is cool but next time I think you should write more ok bye.
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ReplyDeleteDear Tama this is okay but what movie are you watching? also you need a smile :)
ReplyDeleteKia ora My name is Lea’asi and where is your work you have done? I look forward to seeing what you do. ka rawe Lea’asi
ReplyDeletesup its leace#beast you need more blogs
ReplyDeleteKia ora. My name is Otukolo and I attend Te hapara School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.I really liked that you wrote about the holidays. This reminds me of what I did during the holidays. Next time you could add some more stories. ka Rawe Otukolo
ReplyDeletei like the background
ReplyDeletekia ora. My name is Aromahana and I attend Te hapara School in Gisborne, i really liked When You added the background .This reminds me of when i make a google slide with herman.Next time you could put more detail into the background.
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